Tuesday, June 23, 2015

Scooter Story by Lucas

Chapter ONE
ONCE THERE WERE SOME PEOPLE WHO WERE PRO SCOOTERS. THEIR NAMES WERE LUCAS,  Phoenix  AND ANDRE. THEY  COULD DO BAR SPINS, TAIL WHIPS AND BRI FLIPS ON their SCOOTERS, BOWL AND RAMPS. THEY WERE PRO SCOOTER TEACHERS and they HELPED PEOPLE BE PRO SCOOTERS ON The BOWL AND RAMPS Too. Then they met a kid called Jarrod and they  just hung with him. They also met a kid called Josh. They got their scooters and they  all had scooters called grits and half mgp.


CHAPTER TWO
THE next day they all went to the skate park and went into the deep as bowl and when Lucas went up the side he did four bar spins and landed it. After that they had a game of S.C.O.O.T. WE HAD TO DO EVERY TRICK THAT SOMEONE DID and if you fail you get a S, if you fail another trick you get a C,  if you reach the letter scoot your out.

CHAPTER THREE
After they all went to the park and they went home on their scooters. They all had dinner  which was  Burger King. The next day they all scooted to town and met a friend at the mall. They met him at the scooter wheels store and they all got new wheels for their scooters.  Lucas, Andre and Phoenix all went home in their car and listened to music on Lucas’s phone. The song they listened to was system of a down. On the way they had kfc for lunch after that they went scootering at the park. Lucas went on the mini bowl at the top and did five tail WIPS in the air then he Went on the big big bowl and did a big big back flip into the soft square pit. Phoenix Andre and jarrod ddi it too. They did a front flip and after that they went home and had butter chicken for dinner. They ate it we went home and went to sleep.  After that day they had breakfast and they had weetbixs for breakfast
That day they went to the skatepark and did heaps of tricks then we got out our bmxs they went on the ramps and did some bar spins up the bowl and did a out let then back in to us then we went home and had tea.                                      The end      



1 comment:

  1. Well done Lucas on this piece of writing!

    I like how you are organising your ideas into chapters and these are being developed as the story develops!

    Just be careful with the colours and fonts you use as this can make the story difficult to read.

    I am really pleased you are really enjoying writing!

    Mr Taylor

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