Tuesday, June 9, 2015
Cold Snow Day by Lucas
I slowly opened the door... then I saw teeny tiny pieces of snow came crashing down on me. I felt the freezing cold snow. I was so freezing I was an ice sculpter because it was very, very cold. I saw my scooter and Phoenix's one too they were covered in snow like a polar bear. When we got them they were stuck to the wall and there was snow up in our axles above our wheels.
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I like how you said you felt like an ice sculpter. That means you must have been really cold. I hope you got your scooter unstuck from the wall.
ReplyDelete* You used strong adjectives
* You used your sense
Wish: To vary your sentence starters.